Narrative
paragraph
20
years old
The unforgettable moment is 6 days ago it was my birthday. I was very
happy because that
day was the important day for me, 20 years ago
when all my family happy because I was born and on that day I opened my
eyes to see the world.
That morning, I went to college with excited
of course because it was my birthday,
and at the time I was 20 years old, on the way I have imagined how my friends would
give congratulate and surprise when I arrived in campus I was
very shocked because
my friends had entered the class and that
means lecturer has came, I went up the stairs in
hurry.
Finally, I arrived in class I go and sit beside my friends, but
after a while I realized that there was
something different from them, they look so silent, when
I invited them
to chat they
did not answer my
question, in break time they keep
away and as if
against me. Even when
the break time no one invited me to have
lunch together, when I asked them no one answer my question, I was very confused and I did not know what should
I do. I thought that maybe they did not remember about my birthday. After the lessons
ended, I was getting
ready to went home and I took one of
my friends to
went home together but they did not
want to went home
with me.
I was very sad at that time, why all of my friends so
different and no one of them remembered about my birthday, and no one gave me
surprised, when I arrived at home I tried to called my boyfriend but the number
was busy, so I decided to text him but he did not reply me, did my boyfriend
forgot about my birthday? I tried to calm down, and did not expect anything
again because expectations is always hurts.
in the afternoon I spend my spare
time to watch TV and chat with my brother, suddenly
there was the sound of people knocked on the door, when I opened the
door I was amazed
that my friends come to gave me surprise, then my boyfriend came
from behind and also
give me a surprise.
I got two of birthday cakes from my boyfriend and also from my friends .I also got a lot of gifts
from them, and
my sister in Jogja also give me a gift,
after blow the
candles and cut the cake my mother took them to
eat together because
my mother had prepare
special dishes for them.
After that we chit chat together and they told me if they just
pretended to against me because it’s my birthday, and of course they remembered
about my birthday, oh my God I was very happy at that time because in my
birthday I got something special from my friend, and I sure that, it was unforgettable
moment that I had, and the best thing I ever had.
- Identifying of story
- Theme : Great experience
- The plot : forward
- Character : Me (writter), my boyfriend, my friends
- Setting of place : collage, home
- Setting of time : 6 days ago, that morning, in the afternoon
- Language features
a)
using
past tense : all verb in this story is
verb 2
b)
using
action verb : opened thought
c)
using
specific participation : I, my boyfriend, my friends
d)
using
time conjunction : finally, this morning
- The first paragraph is introduction
- The second until the fourth paragraph are complication
- The fifth paragraph and last paragraph are resolution
Ø The red color are transition
Ø The green color is topic sentence
- Analysis of the story
Introductory paragraph :
The
unforgettable moment is 6 days
ago it was my
birthday. I was very happy because that
day was the important day for me, 20 years ago
when all my family happy because I was born and on that day I opened my
eyes to see the world.
Topic sentence : The unforgettable
moment is 6 days ago
it was my birthday.
Suporting sentence :
That morning, I
went to college with
excited of course because it was my birthday, and at the
time I was 20 years old, on the way I have imagined how my friends would
give congratulate and surprise when I arrived in campus I was
very shocked because
my friends had entered the class and that
means lecturer has came, I went up the stairs in
hurry.
Finally, I
arrived in class I go and sit beside my friends, but
after a while I realized that there was something
different from them,
they look so silent,
when I invited
them to chat
they did not answer
my question, in break
time they keep away and as if against me. Even
when the break time no one invited me
to have lunch together, when I asked them no one answer my question, I was very confused and
I did not know
what should I do.
I thought that maybe they did not remember about my birthday. After
the lessons ended, I was getting ready to
went home and I
took one of my friends
to went home together
but they did not
want to went home
with me.
I was very sad at
that time, why all of my friends so different and no one of them remembered
about my birthday, and no one gave me surprised, when I arrived at home I tried
to called my boyfriend but the number was busy, so I decided to text him but he
did not reply me, did my boyfriend forgot about my birthday? I tried to calm
down, and did not expect anything again because expectations is always hurts.
in the afternoon I spend my spare
time to watch TV and chat with my brother, suddenly there
was the sound of people knocked
on the door, when I opened the door
I was amazed that my friends come to gave me surprise, then my boyfriend came from
behind and also give me a surprise.
I got two of birthday cakes from my boyfriend and also from my friends .I also got a lot of gifts
from them, and
my sister in Jogja also give me a gift,
after blow the
candles and cut the cake my mother took them to
eat together because
my mother had prepare
special dishes for them.
CONCLUDING SENTENCES : After that we chit chat together and they told me if
they just pretended to against me because it’s my birthday, and of course they
remembered about my birthday, oh my God I was very happy at that time because
in my birthday I got something special from my friend, and I sure that, it was
unforgettable moment that I had, and the best thing I ever had.
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