NAME            : DITA ADELIA

SRN                : 12340017

4^th Semester 

1.      Give description on how to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion.

The way to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion, you should concern the component below :

First the text must relevance how to write a text with cohesion is look at the meaning of the sentence. and see the meaning of the next sentence. the meaning of the two sentences should be interconnected, but not the same. because if the meaning is the same sentence and then the reader will get bored and we just repetitions words.

Second is order, every paragraph should have main idea usually in paragraph there chronological, cause and effect, clarification, contras/compare

The third linking words transition help writer to make a paragraph , because with linking words transition make the reader easy to understand.

The last is repetition of key words, repetition of words is necessary to better explain in the next sentence, but the repetition of the phrase should not be done because the reader will not get any new information from the sentence, and the sentence will be impressed with the extravagance of a sentence, so it is not required but is also required sentence repetition of the word.

2.      Tell more about cohesion

Cohesion is something that is very important in writing, because it greatly affects the cohesion of art in your writing. although some people say that we do not need too much attention to cohesion, but cohesion in writing helps the reader easy to  move from one sentence to the next sentence because the cohesion.

3.      Write more about the difference between cohesion and coherence

coherence	cohesion
Coherence means that the relationship of the ideas in a sentence coherence refers to the "rhetoric" aspects of writing, which can develop a paragraph which we write, synthesize and integrate the readings in paragraph reading, organizing readings in paragraphs and clarify the ideas in the paragraph we have write.	cohesion is more focused on writing and grammar in more cohesion refers to the repetition of the word in a sentence is not a sentence repetition existing

4.      Show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table.

I AM DITA ADELIA

Hello in this wonderful moment I want to describe about my self, about my physical, my hobbies, and many others thing about me, because sometimes we need to describe our self for make the other people easy to know about us, okay and lets read about my self.

            My name is Dita Adelia you can call me Dita, Adel, or Lia but actually my friend always called me “Dinyok”. I think it is my famous name because since in junior high school my friend called me dinyok. but I think never mind it is not the big problem for me, I am 20 years old I was born on April 2^nd 1994, in Santa Maria hospital, now I study in Muhammadiyyah University  of Metro and I am in the 4^th semester.

 Now we will talk about my physical I have a big black eyes, thick eyebrow and I proud to have thick eyebrow, because now thick eyebrow becoming the style that hits. I have thin lips, and I have tall body, and my friend always say that sometimes I look like model, and I always laugh about this joke. I have exotic brown skin yeah and that’s make beautiful, and I have curly hair 6 months but, I always straighten my hair to make it more beautiful.

I am a nice person, humble person with everyone who meet me, fussy but funy. I am a loyal person, and sometimes I can be the arrogant and cruel person why? Because I fell uncomfortable in one condition. but actually I am a good girl for a good boy.

If we talk about my hobby I have many hobbies like reading a book novel maybe or magazine, shopping with my friends or my boyfriend and sometimes with my lovely mother, swimming, traveling, dancing, hunting all of the kind of food in this city, spend my time to chit chat with my friends, and the interesting one is I love cooking very much because everyday before I go to campus I always cook for my mother and my younger brother.

I have one father, one mother and one older sister and one younger brother, but now I live with my mother and my younger sister because of why? because my father have called by Allah or passed away, and my older sister still study in Jogja.

And I think that’s all about me, about Dita Adelia a girl who always think that the world is kingdom and I am the queen of this world, so I can do everything in this world to make this world become a good kingdom, and now the first step is I have to finish my study and we can see about the next.

My name is Dita adelia you can call me Dita,Adel, or lia but actually my friend always called me “Dinyok” . I think it is my famous name because since in junior high school my friend called me dinyok.	Because this sentences shows the cohesion because between first sentences and second sentences is relevance. That’s proven by the second sentence which the supporting of the first sentence
I have thin lips, and I have tall body, and my friend always say that sometimes I look like model, and I always laugh about this joke	This sentences show the cohesion because the “ I look like model” explain about  “ I have tall body”
I am a loyal person, and sometimes I can be the arrogant and cruel person why? Because I fell uncomfortable in one condition	This sentences shoe the cohesion because there is ling king words transition That’s proven by the second sentence support the first sentence.
I have one father, one mother and one older sister and one younger brother, but now I live with my mother and my younger sister because of why?, because my father have called by Allah or passed away, and my older sister still study in Jogja	This sentences shoe the cohesion because there is linking words transition That’s proven by the second sentence support the first sentence.
And I think that’s all about me, about DITA ADELIA a girl who always think that the world is kingdom and I am the queen of this world, so I can do everything in this world to make this world become a good kingdom, and now the first step is I have to finish my study and we can see about the next.	Because this sentences shows the cohesion because between first sentences and second sentences is relevance. That’s proven by the second sentence which the supporting of the first sentence